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My month of May

Photo by Robert Herman

Photo by Robert Herman

I’m using the month of May to recover.  Just as if finishing a marathon, I’m going to take some time now to allow my brain to rest.  Yesterday I spent time analyzing what I wanted to accomplish over these next four weeks.

My goals for the month of May include:

* outline new script

* rewrite Super Ted

* write 30 fitness articles for Livestrong

* watch 15 movies

* read 10 scripts

* sharpen up the resume

* fix up and decide on a direction for this website

* start the summer garden

* paint/redecorate the apartment

Damn it… what happened to me taking it easy this month?

Rock ‘N’ Roll

Art by Marc Johns

Art by Marc Johns

It’s been a ridiculously awesome couple of days.

I’ll keep it short and sweet.

* I successively submitted my super hero script, entitled Super Ted, to the Nicholl Fellowship, the Silver Screenwriting Competition, and Script P.I.M.P.

* I attended Julie Gray’s writing workshop entitled “Idea to the Page to the Screen.”  The best way to sum up the experience is to compare it to back when I was trying to improve as a basketball player in college.  You can bust your butt doing individual work, practicing and improving your skills, but there’s nothing like going against up to head to head competition. 

I’ve improved because of the work I’ve put in on screenwriting, but when I shared my script and was put to the test up against much more experienced writers, I drove the lane with confidence only to get my shit swatted.  Julie and the group consistently challenged me and made me work, so while it was somewhat of an uncomfortable experience since I was thrown outside of my comfort zone, I came out of it with a much better knowledge of where I need to go from here.  She’ll be teaching a couple more workshops around the country, and I highly recommend signing up if she teaches around you.

* My Brother Mick, the script I completed last year, made it as a quarterfinalist in Script Doctor Eric’s Screenwriting Competition.  Semifinalists will be named on May 10th and the finalists on May 15th.

* I was able to catch a couple movies yesterday, including 1952′s High Noon (wow, great flick) and last month’s Death at a Funeral (so far wins my vote for the worst movie of the year).

I took yesterday completely off to get some sleep and let my brain take a much needed break.  Today I spent time organizing how I’m going to spend the next month, laying out goals and deadlines of things I want to get done by June 1st.

25 Days Until Nicholl’s

With 25 days until the deadline for Nicholl’s, b.s. time is over.  I can’t be whiney, self-conscious, or take my time any longer with Superhero.  It needs to get done.

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I was able to catch Hot Tub Time Machine this weekend, which was entertaining, to say the least.  I laughed out loud a bunch of times.  It’s not as good as The Hangover, but it had the same type of strong comedic performances.

It’s been added to my “Flix Watched in 2010” list.  Scriptshadow recently reviewed the script and has it up for download on their site.

My superhero doesn’t have an armored suit, but…

Because I’ve been struggling a little bit with Superhero, I decided to spend some more time analyzing similar movies.  At the end of the day yesterday, I made some popcorn, poured a glass of wine, and sat down and watched Iron Man.

Because there’s no screenplay available for the movie (Jeff Bridges claims there never was one), I watched it scene to scene, writing down what I thought the purpose was for each.

I’m far from a sci-fi lover or fantasy fan, but Iron Man is a damn good flick; the humor and non-stop excitement of it is exactly what I’m trying to inject into Superhero.

Watching it got my brain going again and got me amped (finally) to get back to work.

Starting the Week off Strong.

“What no [spouse] of a writer can ever understand is that a writer is working when he’s staring out of the window.”– Burton Rascoe (Source: Go Into The Story).

In between sessions of staring out the window, today I’m hoping to:

* finish Superhero

* read The Hurt Locker

* finish two freelance articles

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Writing First Thing In The Morning…

Today has been incredibly long and yet I can’t believe it’s already 3 o’clock.  Dah!

Now that I’m exhausted, it’s time to get some work in on Superhero.

Starting tomorrow, I’m going to adopt a tip I picked up from Hilary Mantel, which she mentioned amongst her “Ten Rules For Writing Fiction.”

#2 – … write first thing in the morning

After I start the coffee maker and feed my whiny cat, I’m going to sit right down and get my writing done first thing.  My mind will be fresh and I’ll feel better throughout the rest of the day knowing that I got it done.

Here is the rest of Hilary’s list, which I borrowed from Go Into The Story.

1 Are you serious about this? Then get an accountant.

2 Read Becoming a Writer, by Dorothea Brande. Then do what it says, including the tasks you think are impossible. You will particularly hate the advice to write first thing in the morning, but if you can manage it, it might well be the best thing you ever do for yourself. This book is about becoming a writer from the inside out. Many later advice manuals derive from it. You don’t ­really need any others, though if you want to boost your confidence, “how to” books seldom do any harm. You can kick-start a whole book with some little writing exercise.

3 Write a book you’d like to read. If you wouldn’t read it, why would anybody else? Don’t write for a perceived audience or market. It may well have vanished by the time your book’s ready.

4 If you have a good story idea, don’t assume it must form a prose narrative. It may work better as a play, a screenplay or a poem. Be flexible.

5 Be aware that anything that appears before “Chapter One” may be skipped. Don’t put your vital clue there.

6 First paragraphs can often be struck out. Are you performing a haka, or just shuffling your feet?

7 Concentrate your narrative energy on the point of change. This is especially important for historical fiction. When your character is new to a place, or things alter around them, that’s the point to step back and fill in the details of their world. People don’t notice their everyday surroundings and daily routine, so when writers describe them it can sound as if they’re trying too hard to instruct the reader.

8 Description must work for its place. It can’t be simply ornamental. It ­usually works best if it has a human element; it is more effective if it comes from an implied viewpoint, rather than from the eye of God. If description is coloured by the viewpoint of the character who is doing the noticing, it becomes, in effect, part of character definition and part of the action.

9 If you get stuck, get away from your desk. Take a walk, take a bath, go to sleep, make a pie, draw, listen to ­music, meditate, exercise; whatever you do, don’t just stick there scowling at the problem. But don’t make telephone calls or go to a party; if you do, other people’s words will pour in where your lost words should be. Open a gap for them, create a space. Be patient.

10 Be ready for anything. Each new story has different demands and may throw up reasons to break these and all other rules. Except number one: you can’t give your soul to literature if you’re thinking about income tax.

The 11th Best Picture Nomination of 2009

This is one of the greatest things I’ve ever seen.

This is a short film entitled “A Trailer for Every Academy Award Winning Movie Ever,” which is claimed to be the 11th Best Picture Nomination of 2009.  It was put together by my new idols, Brian McElhaney and Nick Kocher.

Brian & Nick’s website can be found here.

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Over the weekend, I spent some time working on Superhero.  Although at times I want to use it a kindling, it’s getting stronger every day.

Would you say I’m selfish? *No… not to your face.*

I was about to post my weekly “Thankful Friday” post this morning when I happened to read this great article from kidlit.com beforehand.  It’s written by a woman named Mary, a literary agent from the Bay Area, and the article is about writers using online platforms to promote themselves and their work.

She made a thorough list of DO’s and DON’Ts, suggesting how writers should focus their online efforts.  She pretty much crapped on what I use my personal site for.  And I am somewhat in agreement with her.  Instead of me only talking about myself, my own projects, or how many times my cat bit me while typing that day, I need to provide some sort of beneficial content for YOU.

I don’t think you reading about my own struggles with Superhero fits in that category.

So, while I’ll continue to provide updates on my own personal writing endeavors, I’m going to put more effort into providing information that’ll help you as a writer.

And that starts TODAY!

First up, this great article by a literary agent on how writers can be more successful with their online platform promotional efforts.  You can read it, here.

Another day, another opportunity.

Today is another opportunity to…

*improve my writing

*make progress on Superhero

*take steps towards getting where I want to be professionally

*make sure that the people I love, know it

That… plus do the laundry, clean the apartment, get my workout in, and run the 500 errands I need to do. 

But first, back to the index cards.

Blake, index cards, and me.

I’ll be swimming laps through index cards all day today, figuring out every detail to the end of this Superhero script before I even think about re-opening Final Draft.

I’m going to use Elizabeth Ditty’s recommendation and bust out Blake Snyder’s book… tighten up a 40 scene outline.

Ready… go!